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Post by kigerfan on Sept 9, 2009 11:11:38 GMT -5
This is called The Storm
Rain in softness falls Light on woolen shoulders Alighting like jewels above molten pools Of eyes that darkly smolders
Clouds intermingle their mist Stretch fingers of darkness down Raindrops fatten to beads of clear satin Plummeting towards the ground
Darkness steals into the clouds Swollen and menacing giants A thunderous roar and heavy downpour The herd stands in defiance
The rain batters the land Hammers of liquid destruction Washing away soil to race and to roil Negotiating any construction
Trees bravely stretch their branches Leafy arms of protection Above huddled horses, while below water courses In rivulets in every direction
Shiny hooves slick with mud Sinking in sodden sand The landscape dim from valley to rim While rivers assault the land
Horses stand heads held low Manes slicked to their necks Coats dripping wind still whipping Tails of mud tangled wrecks
The wind begins to relent Curtains of rain pull aside Sun peeking through sky showing blue Horses no longer hide
Foals from the safety of cover Peek wonderingly up at the sky Blackness draining dreariness waning White clouds whispering by
Mares begin to graze On rain pummeled grasses Battered down shoots pulled up by roots The last of the dark clouds passes
Sun shining brightly now On rain sodden backs Steam adrift from shoulder rift Stallion and mares relax
Foals cavort, jump and splash Sun dancing in a puddle Sparring foals dark as coals Above the last clouds scuttle
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Post by stormyranch on Sept 9, 2009 21:43:57 GMT -5
Very nice!
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Post by DianneC on Sept 12, 2009 0:41:11 GMT -5
I can see it the way you describe it. Very nice.
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